From that one morn The winds only strengthened With the sounds of mourning The cries only lengthened
Never did the winds halt not on that period of sun... (my string of words stops here, out of time and words EDIT, second half of poem can be found in part 2 - Faded)
Vision: Great thinking of doing this. Playing with the wind is such a hard task to do, but you managed to think through it and it definitely paid off! Great job!
Originality & Impact: It may not be the most-original artwork in here, but it's entirely awesome and can stand alone. This work makes me think of life. Makes me think of Love. Makes me think of Time. Makes me think of Lost Love. Makes me think of more. Great work dear friend.
Technique: Great job to capture this perfectly. The background of light yellowish-greenish is perfect. The hand is perfect. The blurriness and fading effect are the moneymakers in here. Great job!
Hello! This wonderful image has been featured in my latest journal here : [link] If for any reason you would prefer it to not be there, please let me know and I'll take it down. Thank you for sharing your creativity with all of us here on dA! -Misty
Originality & Impact: It may not be the most-original artwork in here, but it's entirely awesome and can stand alone. This work makes me think of life. Makes me think of Love. Makes me think of Time. Makes me think of Lost Love. Makes me think of more. Great work dear friend.
Technique: Great job to capture this perfectly. The background of light yellowish-greenish is perfect. The hand is perfect. The blurriness and fading effect are the moneymakers in here. Great job!
Excellent work! Waiting for more from you.
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